Today

Guitar part is very cool. I like the flow and melody of the chorus. Dropped down an octave, the chorus would remind me of old Cat Stevens (a very good thing to me) with a twist. The vocal bit starting at about :50 loses me. It seems too loud and a bit too strained (and I know about straining one's voice). I hope you keep working with this. There's great indredients, and a lot of potential here.

I don't usually like octave jumping melodies, kind of a cheesy way to form a melody. But the beginning wasn't bad in spite of that. And then the falsetto parts came along and just ruined it for me...it just sounds goofy from that point on.
I'd rethink this whole concept.
You guys are better than this.

i kinda like this. . . it is drawn out well, and the vocals are more of a stretch than your usual. good job.

Tighten Up and Gloss Over and your cookin with gas. Almost feel like this could be 2 songs for you.