balcerebon

i kinda like this. . . it is drawn out well, and the vocals are more of a stretch than your usual. good job.

B-Easy could use some pointers from you! this is #@&%!in' creative, good job, bud! i like the references to the other MC's, keeps us from trying to compare you to them, clever! beat isn't bad, a little bland, but it serves its purpose. . .

apparently! thanks again, bud : )

thaks, rich!

again i agree with pynner, though Orbital isn't the first to come to mind. it's a little more of a stripped-down Thom Yorke. i totally dig the minimalist percussive sounds you use, and your ethereal qualities are always top notch. something is a little thin here though. perhaps a few meaningful soundbytes, or a speech, or even the schizo-like feel of hidden voices or whispering. i don't know, something to make this a little creepier would be fitting. . .

yeah, pynner, this is much closer to NOFX. not bad at all. i like the little start-stop fx before the first hook.

i can tell you are putting a lot more effort into your stuff, or at least this track, i like it better than your old tracks, that were on cliche after another. there has been a lot of improvement. beat is a little different, but does need to be brought out more, like some funk instrumentation or something. basically i agree with pynner. lyrics have improved, you need to keep using your imagination more, you are doing a good job at it so far.

btw, i like the profanity, it may be cheap, but it makes it stand out in terms of contemporariness (if that's a word). our generation doesn't even flinch at a string of #@&%!s and #@&%!s

i tend to automatically categorize stuff by comparing and contrasting the various blends of popular (or unpopular) styles of recorded artists, but its just my way of getting a feel for whatever style it is i am categorizing. you know, this sounds like ___ meets ____, with a hint of ___....... i never intend to point out that the style has been done before, etc. unless i specifically say so, as the style is hackneyed.

retro, but #@&%!ed into a contemporary piece. brilliant! seriously. this is good, really.

definitely not my kinda stuff normally, it sounds a long the lines of downset, but with a death cab for cutie twist. maybe a hint of system of the down or Dream Theater. pretty good, really. unique blend. good guitar wailing.

the bassline is kickass! this is, as unk said, good ole fashioned reggae. . . are you playing the bass on this one? some dub reverb/echo on the vocals would really pump this one up. . . your voice sounds a lot like Bradley's. . .

very mellow

this is more appropriately rustic, works pretty well. you seem to be gaining confidence in your voice