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2/8/2015 CliveAnders 5813 CliveAnders
4 stars [3 Votes, 4.17 Stars]
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InnerCombustion -  
Self Control
Rejection Reason: Sans Melody
Average Rating: [5 Votes, 4.2 Stars]
Views: 1,209
Liner Notes
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [2/20/2007 11:35:59 PM EST]
Score: +0
thanks unklesam
unklesam [12/12/2006 11:25:20 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 4 stars
I think this should be reconsidered- its friggin jammin bigtime
complex rock, progressive but it flows
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/20/2006 9:46:37 PM EST]
Score: +0
hey thanks man
DrumKirk89 [9/20/2006 5:41:56 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 5 stars
5 stars, because i could never stop listening to this song.
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 11:51:33 PM EST]
Score: +0
haha ok then! just meditate on your opinion later.
itchybrother [9/19/2006 11:44:30 PM EST]
Score: +0
I'm at home with no speakers so for now, yeah, that's it!
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 11:39:21 PM EST]
Score: +0
haha thanks
anything else? :)
itchybrother [9/19/2006 11:32:08 PM EST]
Score: +0
I hate to be all picky but,

the phrase is "night and day" not "light and day".

as in, "the piano part was like night and day compared to the part before it"

if it were like "light and day", then it would belong.
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 11:26:55 PM EST]
Score: +0
i think you guys are taking the piano part way too seriously. its suppost to be abrupt, and i dont think its a bad transition. the point is from red to blue, dynamics. its not supposed to be some smooth flowing thing right there, its supposed to drop off and quinten tarintino it up. you eventually come back to the end again.
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 11:19:29 PM EST]
Score: +0
aaronlife [9/19/2006 11:17:54 PM EST]
Score: +0
Mr. Bratty [9/19/2006 11:17:48 PM EST]
Score: +0
r. crumb depicted it as the "shelf effect"
TheBuyer [9/19/2006 11:14:34 PM EST]
Score: +0
by that I mean, you would make this sound different if you could plug said brain directly into ADAT
TheBuyer [9/19/2006 11:11:57 PM EST]
Score: +0
also the mistakes are many and obvious, this doesn't help. I think the junk inside your brain is not what I'm hearing here
TheBuyer [9/19/2006 11:10:26 PM EST]
Score: +0
i don't like the vocals or sentiment but the arrangement has at least one noteworthy part, mostly due to dementedness and sudden piano playing.
Mr. Bratty [9/19/2006 11:09:35 PM EST]
Score: +0
i know that one!
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 11:08:04 PM EST]
Score: +0
heres a word of the day for you guys- steatopygia. that is all.
Hey Buyer, what do u think of the tune?
TheBuyer [9/19/2006 11:05:30 PM EST]
Score: +0
that's how zipper went from a brand name to an item found on the front of pants requiring no further explanation.
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 10:52:30 PM EST]
Score: +0
haha can do
Mr. Bratty [9/19/2006 10:51:54 PM EST]
Score: +0
word of the day. look it up. use it. wear it out.
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 10:51:13 PM EST]
Score: +0
Mr. Bratty [9/19/2006 10:49:40 PM EST]
Score: +0
ubiquitous means "everywhere at once"
aaronlife [9/19/2006 10:45:28 PM EST]
Score: +0
i like the piano by itself, i guess that's your self-control, and i like the idea, but the way you did it didn't work, for me personally, very highly impressive stuff, enjoyable, but i'm not sure where i sit on this, except that at three minutes now it's not holding my attention anymore... yeah, parts of this i like, parts of this are flat for me, i'm not going to rate, i think it's a matter of personal listening taste that might be getting in the way, but i agree with bratty, i like the piano/guitar around 4:20, that's actually where it gets nice for me. i think i'd cut out the first 4 minutes, or cut out from 2 minutes to 4 minutes, if i was in charge... if you like it as is, ignore me.
mikebritt [9/19/2006 10:16:35 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 4 stars
pat recorded this, but the mix / master is my doing

at first i thought it was "sans melody" but it didn't take me long to be able to sing along with it. he also does alot of maynard esque stuff with his voice

he also kinda sings like the guy from jethro tull

i for one am a fan of the piano thing... very rarely nowadays do artists #@&%! with the listeners like that. It does remind me alot of a NIN thing but the classic rock #@&%! that happens afterwords redeems it

and i NEVER give four stars
animalhouse1015 [9/19/2006 7:48:58 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 4 stars
I love the singer, i love the guitarist, i love the keyboard player, i love the bassist, and i love the drummer all because...

they are all the same #@&%!in person!
you are musical genious
Mr. Bratty [9/19/2006 7:47:08 PM EST]
Score: +0
there is a lot of stuff happening. maybe a little too much. i'd say this song needs to be sifted through and edited down. stay on target.
singmetofire [9/19/2006 7:18:20 PM EST]
Score: +0
still processing...this happens often.
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 7:17:16 PM EST]
Score: +0
theres alot of stuff going on in this one- for best results, do turn your speakers up
singmetofire [9/19/2006 3:27:11 PM EST]
Score: +0
nah, it's just interesting. that's all.
I've listened to this 3 times.

Still processing.
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 3:23:19 PM EST]
Score: +0
Nova - yeah- some people dig the contast to the piano part, its really light and day from the part before it, but i can see where it would not strike well with people too.

Sing- i dont know if youre being sarcastic or not haha. Its six minutes long because it is, i didnt stretch it to be 'long' or anything.

leathermouse- thats the coolest thing i've ever heard, haha thanks
singmetofire [9/19/2006 1:55:05 PM EST]
Score: +0
six minutes long?

That's interesting.
NovaVox [9/19/2006 1:46:20 PM EST]
Score: +0
I don't know, something is just too bargain about this...

Kinda seems like bargain Soundgarden (Fell on bad days) but with less cool singing...

Some of those strange timing things are cool, I also don't like the out of character piano in the middle...

No rating, this has stuff, I just don't like it...
NovaVox [9/19/2006 1:40:18 PM EST]
Score: +0
Your kid has to rate it then.
leathermouse [9/19/2006 1:38:56 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 4 stars
My kid just came in rockin out to this one. Automatic four stars.
InnerCombustion (song submitter) [9/19/2006 11:44:08 AM EST]
Score: +0
me playing each instrument

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