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11/28/2006

Agatha's Memory - Tempted is a ballad we wrote with sweeping guitars flowing into graceful violin and passionate drum crashes of  mezzmerizing mealodys sung by the warm alluring sound of vocalist Alyssa Yeager  
Tempted
Genre: Rock
Weighted Rating: [1 Vote, 4 Stars]
Views: 1,343
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Liner Notes
WILLBMUSIC [6/20/2007 5:59:19 PM EST]
Score: +0
Nice pic., suites the song mood well, very calming
itchybrother [11/28/2006 5:47:38 PM EST]
Score: +0
let the bad jokes begin...

I was tempted...to press Stop as soon as the cymbals came shimmering in.

The chorus on the guitar is bad too.
ScottT [11/28/2006 6:49:08 AM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 4 stars
qualcomm [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
never ever ever ever do that thing with the cymbals at the beginning. so lame. lyrics are garbage, and the song has no energy. sub-bonnie tyler. still, based on its battle rating, i gotta put it on second stage.
chickadee [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
Nice voice, nice song, well done.
ScottT [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
This is definitely feature material. good sound, excellent playing and vocals.
drummerameye [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
best on this site so far
I want to take that step
Across the room
Just come alittle closer it will be alright
Ignore those eyes
and the whispers in your mind
Our protests growing weaker every night

If we could only dismiss
Our friends and our lovers
Who can forget?
And let us be free
But if we make this decision
To be with one another
then it just comes down to you and me

And I'm Tempted by your touch
Tempted by your smile
And Tempted by your body in the rain
I see you watching over me
Like I'm watching over you
Though our feelings must be hidden by this game
And I'm dreaming of your face
Dreaming of your tast
Though I know you'll never hold me in your arms

There's to many from our past
To let these feelings last
and if I act it's sure to bring you harm

But I'm Tempted by your touch
Tempted by your smile
and Tempted by your body in the rain
I'm so Tempted by your touch
Tempted by your smile
And Tempted by your body in the rain
I see their watching over me
Like their watching over you
I wish the shadows hid us both and stopped the shame

You want to take that step
Across the room
Just a little closer can it be alright
Look into my eyes
Look into my mind
And wish that we could be alone tonight
Tonight