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2/8/2015 CliveAnders 5813 CliveAnders
4 stars [3 Votes, 4.17 Stars]
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Whisper Scream (take 3)
boygenuis: After listening to this on repeat a bunch, I think I can find a place for this in my collection.
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elysian fury - a career's worth of demos from 2000-2009 
Fall in Line
Genre: Acoustic
Rejection Reason: None Specified
Average Rating: [4 Votes, 3.13 Stars]
Views: 1,391
Liner Notes
wordgirl62 [1/27/2007 9:32:26 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 3.5 stars
How wild! This is a listening pleasure--mAKES ME THINK.
KeavesSharpy [1/27/2007 9:31:50 PM EST]
Score: +0
it's in my pants. The love, I mean.
KeavesSharpy [1/27/2007 9:31:15 PM EST]
Score: +0
i have a secret love for you guys. Don't tell anyone.
chickadee [1/27/2007 9:28:23 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 3 stars
I like this quirky beat.
aaronlife [12/19/2006 11:36:19 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 3 stars
it's like a refreshing wandering through a city when you're low on blood sugar.
ScottT [12/19/2006 6:51:40 AM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 3 stars
Love the guitar
Greyfield [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
I finally get this music...could it have taken me any longer? This I like a lot. It's fascinating in ways that most other songs just aren't. Dammit. Now I have to go back and listen to the other tracks and see what I was missing (but wouldn't it be funny if I still disliked the previous songs?).
The Taste [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
You annoy me, I don't care if you don't vote for me in the battles- you should erase yourself from Red Fizz.
suckerpunch [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
dark and dirty- great stuff
mikebritt (song submitter) [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
you won the battle, but there are a few problems with this song:

1. it is too long. there are three parts that get repeated three times. this is not necessary

2. there is a rhythmic error so close to the beginning why didn't you just start over?

3. some of the lyrics don't make sense, and some of the lyrics aren't even real words. slow down and write a cohesive statement before recording the song you wrote five minutes ago. you might end up posting it on redfizz a month later and regretting that your english isn't proper

4. learn how to sing. or at least try doing more than one take of a song once in a while

5. the instrumental section after the second chorus is boring. use drums next time

6. you ended the song with that same chord you end that other song with... is this supposed to be some kind of joke? grow up!

good luck, me

sincerely, you
i expected the rejection but what's the reason? sometimes that's the best part