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7/5/2007

Dave O'Donnell - Singer/songwriter 
Uncle Bud
Rejection Reason: Monotonous
Weighted Rating: [6 Votes, 4.73 Stars]
Views: 1,818
Featured Review
DaveOD [7/6/2007 10:01:23 AM EST]
Score: +40
Well somethings you just can't make up. This little tale is true, but I don't think this is the appropriate forum to go into details. I was just as shocked as the next guy, when I heard the story, but felt oddly compelled to immortalize it, in song. Suffice it to say, during sexual congress, if you don't start at the right end, it leaves a mark. Or at least, in Bud's case it did. I'm guessing he didn't give her a kiss good-bye.
unklespaz [11/12/2008 12:05:56 AM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 5 stars
still a classic
unklespaz [11/9/2008 10:30:10 AM EST]
Score: +0
Hi Dave, welcome back to the crazy astral world of the fiz
DaveOD (song submitter) [11/9/2008 3:45:43 AM EST]
Score: +0
ugh! I've been stuck in "Real World" hell. It'll be a couple more weeks yet, until the "studio" is up and running again.
Richie Isaacs [11/8/2008 2:51:08 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 5 stars
I'll go lure him back.
*puts on mini skirt,high heels and clown wig*
unklespaz [11/8/2008 2:20:32 PM EST]
Score: +0
Dave: get back here and catch up with your friends on the fizz. Also, submit more stuff please? What are you up to silly?
drfringe [7/25/2007 11:00:29 PM EST]
Score: +0
haha "I no longer like long johns"
drfringe [7/25/2007 10:59:20 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 5 stars
don't you have a sequel to this?
RuSTY StAGGERBUsH [7/6/2007 2:34:43 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 3 stars
Ha ha! Recording with the tv on thinking we wouldn't notice. Tried to sneak that one past us, huh Dave? I see what someone meant when they said there were similar songs in battle to mine. Do I know you Dave? Of course not, but we are swimming similar waters. Lyrically, this is a little crude for my taste. It borders on humorous so I give it a pass. I liked the train whistles. I no longer like long johns.
unklesam [7/6/2007 2:07:51 PM EST]
Score: +0
I'm just quoting dayra below, spelling and all
DaveOD (song submitter) [7/6/2007 10:34:45 AM EST]
Score: +0
By the way, it's congruent, not congruant and I'm not a big fan of barre chords on an acoustic guitar, so the chords, by their very nature won't be the same shape (or angle, if you go by the strict definition), so I'm not exactly sure what you meant, by that. It's pretty much a straight forward 8-bar blues. I IV I V I IV I - V - I, it ain't rocket science.
crash [7/6/2007 8:32:46 AM EST]
Score: +0
congruant guitar work is almost nonexistent
crash [7/6/2007 8:29:46 AM EST]
Score: +10
you do realize it's a little strange comparing colons and fudge tunnels to chocolate donuts right? I get the analogy, but it's still disturbing, maybe I'm old fashioned
DaveOD (song submitter) [7/6/2007 2:03:36 AM EST]
Score: +0
Mmmm....donuts!
aaronlife [7/5/2007 7:40:51 PM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 4 stars
fukin awesome
itchybrother [7/5/2007 9:39:54 AM EST]
Score: +0
yeah the train whistle did add that extra something to the song. It says, "if you hadn't figured it out yet, I'm off my nut."
crash [7/5/2007 8:36:27 AM EST]
Score: +0
Rated 5 stars
crash [7/5/2007 8:36:14 AM EST]
Score: +0
this is so obscene
and this is one of my fav tracks you've ever done,
#@&%! yeah, I just ask for 10 more like this
2 more holes? I'd like to see the reaction you get on bag lady
sedrite [posted during evaluation]
Score: +10
all hat no cattle. I do like the whistle tho.
Greyfield [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
I was completely unimpressed **until** the fake train whistle....now I can't wait to download this gem! This song makes me want to run really hard into a wall and fall down. And then eat a chocolate doughnut. Excuse me, donut, for the Dave Fans.
itchybrother [posted during evaluation]
Score: +0
I'm speechless. As I should be.
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dayra [posted during evaluation]
Score: +12
dave, oh davie boy, do you mind if i call you davie jones, i didnt think so, nice, interesting, and almost god like, your fans in the sea should be mighty proud of you congruant initial gutar work........

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