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2/8/2015 CliveAnders 5813 CliveAnders
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boygenuis: After listening to this on repeat a bunch, I think I can find a place for this in my collection.
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6/24/2012

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At the turn of the new year (2014) Everett embarks on a new journey of self discovery. Everett plans on being the first man to open a music studio on the moon. He is convinced that an all female civilization will come from all over the universe to record in his studio, soon to be called "Lunar Tuner Studios."

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Spruce Goose [6/25/2012 3:21:54 AM EST]
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and a bass would help a lot. i think ur voice works in a lou reed way, but there's a lotta things that need to be fixed
Spruce Goose [6/25/2012 3:20:14 AM EST]
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try recording guitars separate from the vocals, might make timing stuff easier
Babar Klunj [posted during evaluation]
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sounds like you rushed through this when recording. Take some time getting it right.
NathanWayne [posted during evaluation]
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I actually started to eventually like the rushedness to it, I need to hear it again.
DaveOD [posted during evaluation]
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The effects aren't helping.The meat of the song wouldn't be so bad if wasn't' for them.The lyric in the bridge just doesn't fit.You really need to rework them so they flow over the rhythm. Try slowing down the tempo during rehearsals, until you can smooth everything out and then worry about playing it at performance tempo after you have it nailed.